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Full Ring Verse

Tolkien left us translation of the Ring inscription into Black Speech. The whole verse was however longer:

Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all, and in the darkness bind them,
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie

There was a translation by Elerrina (EL) in journals “Quettar” #16 (pp. 6–7, 1982) and “Vinyar Tengwar” #13 (pp. 13–15, 1990). It was not flawless but became the additional word base for later Black Speech dialects.

Gakh Nazgi Ilid/Albai/Golug durub-uuri lata-nuut.
Udu takob-ishiz gund-ob Gazat-shakh-uuri.
Krith Shara-uuri matuurz matat duumpuga.
Ash tug Shakhbuurz-uur Uliima-tab-ishi za,
Uzg-Mordor-ishi amal fauthut burguuli.
[Ash nazg durbatulûk, ash nazg gimbatul
Ash nazg thrakatulûk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul]
Uzg-Mordor-ishi amal fauthut burguuli.

It is not very accurate, as it translates back into English as:

Three rings for elven rulers under the sky
Seven for Dwarf-lords in theirs of stone 
Nine for mortal men doomed to die
One only for Dark Lord in this his throne
In Mordor land where Shadows lie
[One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all, and in the darkness bind them]
In Mordor land where Shadows lie

This translations doesn't satisfy objectives of Nûrlâm, so we need to translate following words into the Black Speech:

English	Black Speech	Etymology and Comments
dark	bûrz	EL, from burzum (darkness)
die	mat-	EL
doomed	dûmpuga	EL, either from Etym. “MBAD” written reversed (“MB” is one letter in Elvish writing systems), see also Quenya “umbar”, or just stylized English word (possibly both)
dwarf	gazat	EL, from Khuzdul “khazad” (dwarves)
elven	golug	TK¹⁾, Angband Orkish “golug” (Noldor elves) from ÑGOLOD, Noldorin “golodh” (one of the wise folk, Gnome²⁾)
	ilid	EL, from “ÉLED” (“Star-folk”, “Firstborn”, Eldar, departed elves)
	albai	EL
for	ûr	EL, dative case suffix
hall	ru	from Shadowlandian (LOS) and Horngoth Orkish, omitted in original translation by Elerrina
king	durub	EL, translated as rulers from “durbat” (to rule)
land	uzg	EL
lie	kât-	LOS, from Quenya “caita” < KAY
lie	fauth-	original translation by Elerrina was “fauth-” (lie hidden)
lord	goth	LOS < Sindarin, from Melkor's epithetic name Morgoth (Dark Enemy or Black Foe)
lord	shakh	EL, Persian word for “king”
man, men	tark	TK, applies only to Númenóreans
man, men	shara	EL, from Isengard Orkish “sharkû” (old man)
Mordor	Uzgbûrz	NL, this name means “Dark Land” in Sindarin, was not translated by Elerrina, therefore it was translated into Black Speech
mortal	matûrz	EL
nine	krith	EL
of	ob	EL, genitive/possessive case suffix
only	tug	EL, absent in original English translation, put into “One (only) for the Dark Lord on (this) his dark throne”
seven	udug	NL < EL “udu”, from OT- > Noldorin “odog”, spelling normalized according to Nûrlâm rules
seven	udu	EL, from OT- > Noldorin “odog”
shadow
shadow	burgûl	EL, from “bûrz” + “gûl” (dark spirit, ghost)
sky	nût	EL
stone	gund	EL, from Etym. “GOND”, compare with “Gondor” meaning “Stone Land” in Sindarin or “Gondolin”
their	ulub	LOS, from TK “ul” (them) and EL “ob” (of)
their	takob	EL, original translation was “tak-ob”
this	za	EL, absent in original English translation, put into “One (only) for the Dark Lord on (this) his dark throne”
three	gakh	EL
throne
throne	ulîma	EL
under	lata	EL
where	amin	NL, relative prefix “a-” (EL) + interrogative prefix “m-” (EL) + “in” < Quenya “en” (there, look!) < Etym. “EN-” (over there, yonder)
where	amal	EL

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²⁾

Elves were called Gnomes in early works

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