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--- translations:orcish_lullaby [2023/09/03 14:54] – wordlist complete? morgoth
+++ translations:orcish_lullaby [2024/04/02 20:47] – 1st stanza raw translation morgoth
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   Where others failed; Tinúviel was name of her.
-Idea of making a lullaby from Lay of Leithian came to me after reading a Russian translation of "Beren and Luthien" book, where line "Down crumpled Orc, down Balrog proud" resembled the song "Sleep tired toys, books are asleep..." from a children show. But making a lullaby for Orcs required changes to be made, for example baby-orc should be afraid of Lúthien. I've also made a quick research to be sure that scary lullabies are the thing in almost every culture.
+Idea of making a lullaby from Lay of Leithian came to me after reading a Russian translation of "Beren and Luthien" book, where line "Down crumpled Orc, down Balrog proud" reminded me of "Sleep tired toys, books are asleep..."(("Спят усталые игрушки, книжки спят...")) from a children show. But making a lullaby for Orcs required changes to be made, for example baby-orc should be afraid of Lúthien. I've also made a quick research to be sure that scary lullabies are the thing in almost every culture.
 It also reflects Tolkien's belief that Evil cannot create art or life:
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 | adder | fâm | Gnomish "fem" (venom of snakes) + MERP "farmak" (venom, poison) |
 | anew | nokhar | lit. "once more" |
-| beauty | fânurm | | Quenya "vanya", "vanima", Sindarin "bain" < Etym. "BAN" |
+| beauty | fânurm | Quenya "vanya", "vanima", Sindarin "bain" < Etym. "BAN" |
 | ceiling | pulz | MERP "pulaz"; added to differentiate from "dîlg" (dome) |
 | crumpled | kunaga | past passive participle "bent" |
 | Doriath | thurkuzg | translation of Sindarin name "Land of the Fence" |
-| enchant | lûf- | from early abandoned translations of PN "Lúthien" (Enchantress) < Ilkorin & Noldorin < Noldorin "lhûtha" (to enchant), Middle-Quenya "luhta";
+| enchant | lûf- | from early abandoned translations of PN "Lúthien" (Enchantress) < Ilkorin & Noldorin < Noldorin "lhûtha" (to enchant), Middle-Quenya "luhta"; also HG "ful-" (to charm) written reversed;\\ also used to translate "bewitching" |
-also HG "ful-" (to charm) written reversed;\\ also used to translate "bewitching" |
 | enmeshed | thuromaga | "thu-" (over) + "rom" (mesh, net) + past passive participle suffix "-aga" |
 | false | prakhûrz | LL "prakh-" (to lure, deceive) |
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 | slumbering | dhûlurm | LOS "dhûl" (sleep) < HG |
 | snobbish | ardaukûrz | NL "ard" (noble) + deragatory agental suffix "-auk" + adjective suffix "-ûrz" |
-| snore | pûz | | Qenya "pusu" (to puff, snort) |
+| snore | pûz | Qenya "pusu" (to puff, snort) |
 | soothe | bort- | HG "borz" (calm, peace) |
 | spell | dosh | merging Gnomish "thoth" (evil spell) with TK BS "dush" (dark sorcery, necromancy) |
 | still | rubh | Qenya "rua", "rúva" (steady, still, tranquil) |
-| theme | lîth |  Qenya "lin", "lind" < early Primitive Elvish root "LIÐI" (to sing) |
+| theme | lîth | Qenya "lin", "lind" < early Primitive Elvish root "LIÐI" (to sing) |
 | thrill | glirsh | merging "girth-" (to quiver, tremble) with "linsh" (music) and with Primitive Elvish root "LIR" (to sing, warble) |
 | unfurled | nanfraghaga | "nan-" (un-, dis-, prefix of cancelling) + "fragh-" (to wrap, enfold) + "-aga" (suffix of past passive participle) |
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+<wrap monospace>Dalashub gizûr imb laush, amarz shi il hoirumob,
+Amil thard dakob kuzâ gok, amil Nazg krampâkuzû rad,
+Âshûrz mor goth dakob faikâkuzâ golugfândirzi,
+Amin isk sauguzû; Lûthnind kuzâ iznab.
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+Mûr finarlor? Lugonk kulâ rûrz.
+Ârshûk agh fughûk drang sudû zîgin.
+Zurmum zurgâ ânghambor
+tumbaga dhun grikor Sangrodgaib.
+Ash ghâshûrz zûl robhug zîgin thûthâ
+glob usk ghu hozah hâghug,
+amin fait glûr blordû taitaga hrizg
+Nôlurmonkri gaib.
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