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--- translations:erlkonig [2022/04/01 20:19] – morgoth
+++ translations:erlkonig [2023/09/07 19:38] (current) – external edit 127.0.0.1
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 ===== Translation into Nûrlâm =====
-It's believed that Erlkönig should be properly translated as "Elf-king" (=> "Golugarn"), but Russian translation by [[wp>Vasily_Zhukovsky|Vasily Zhukovsky]] uses "Forest King" (which I prefer, but Nûrlâm's "tau" and "arn" do not form compound word).
+It's believed that Erlkönig should be properly translated as "Elf-king" (=> "Golugarn"), but Russian translation by [[wp>Vasily_Zhukovsky|Vasily Zhukovsky]] uses "Forest King" (which I prefer, but Nûrlâm's "tau" and "arn" do not form a pleasant compound word; also it would make sense that parent orcs ignite the prejudice against elves in their children by singing this song).
 > Mai bamâ lad zârz fugh as agh zûl as?
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 > Krankdab, krankdab, agh narmarkoz
-> Amash Golugarn fadâtiz ghilarz? --
+> Amash Golugarn fadâ dazûr ghilarz? --
 > Ghilarz! Dab khind, irn borzarz;
 > Thizg gâth as zûlum shlûshâ." --
 >
-> "Fimarhiz, gonbhog, ukhut dasha?
+> "Fimarhiz, ghonbhog, ukhut dasha?
 > Dab nind darbubûtam bhogarz;
 > Dab nind dûghû fugh ting,

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