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full_ring_verse_in_nurlam [2021/10/12 22:44] – [The Translation] morgoth | full_ring_verse_in_nurlam [2023/09/07 19:38] (current) – external edit 127.0.0.1 | ||
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In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie | In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie | ||
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- | There was a [[elerrina_list|translation by Elerrina]] ([[abbreviations|EL]]) in journals " | + | There was a [[elerrina_list|translation by Elerrina]] ([[abbreviations|EL]]) in journals " |
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+ | <WRAP center round important 60%> | ||
+ | Please note, that the full Ring verse was composed by Elves after they discovered about the One Ring. | ||
+ | \\ Sauron' | ||
+ | \\ He didn't knew about three elven rings before finishing the One, | ||
+ | \\ also he personally gave only six rings to Dwarves, and the seventh was given to Durin III by Elves. | ||
+ | \\ Anyway, the Ring Verse is a good translation excercise. | ||
+ | </ | ||
===== The List of required words ===== | ===== The List of required words ===== | ||
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| land | uzg | EL | | | land | uzg | EL | | ||
| lie | kât- | LOS, from Quenya " | | lie | kât- | LOS, from Quenya " | ||
- | | lord | mâkh | NL, Valarin " | + | | lord | mâgz | NL, Valarin " |
| man, men | tark | TK, DBS, LOTR; Taken from language of orcs of Misty Mountains and other northern groups;\\ Quenya " | | man, men | tark | TK, DBS, LOTR; Taken from language of orcs of Misty Mountains and other northern groups;\\ Quenya " | ||
| mortal | matûrz | EL | | | mortal | matûrz | EL | | ||
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===== The Translation ===== | ===== The Translation ===== | ||
Krig nazg arnûr golug lata nût | Krig nazg arnûr golug lata nût | ||
- | Udug gazat mâkhûr | + | Udug gazat mâgzûr |
Krith tark-haizûr matûrz dûmpuga ghurut | Krith tark-haizûr matûrz dûmpuga ghurut | ||
- | Ash mâkhbûrzûr | + | Ash mâgzbûrzûr |
Uzgbûrzor amin bathum katû | Uzgbûrzor amin bathum katû | ||
Ash nazg durbatulûk, | Ash nazg durbatulûk, | ||
Ash nazg thrakatulûk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul | Ash nazg thrakatulûk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul | ||
- | Uzgbûrzor amin bathum | + | Uzgbûrzor amin bathum |
Original text is quite straightforward and does not contain complex grammar. [[grammar_case|Case endings]] differ from Elerrina' | Original text is quite straightforward and does not contain complex grammar. [[grammar_case|Case endings]] differ from Elerrina' |