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====== Full Ring Verse in Nûrlâm ====== | ====== Full Ring Verse in Nûrlâm ====== | ||
Tolkien left us translation of the [[ring-verse|Ring inscription]] into Black Speech. The whole verse was however longer: | Tolkien left us translation of the [[ring-verse|Ring inscription]] into Black Speech. The whole verse was however longer: | ||
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In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie | In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie | ||
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- | There was a [[elerrina_list|translation by Elerrina]] ([[abbreviations|EL]]) in journals " | + | There was a [[elerrina_list|translation by Elerrina]] ([[abbreviations|EL]]) in journals " |
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+ | Please note, that the full Ring verse was composed by Elves after they discovered about the One Ring. | ||
+ | \\ Sauron' | ||
+ | \\ He didn't knew about three elven rings before finishing the One, | ||
+ | \\ also he personally gave only six rings to Dwarves, and the seventh was given to Durin III by Elves. | ||
+ | \\ Anyway, the Ring Verse is a good translation excercise. | ||
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===== The List of required words ===== | ===== The List of required words ===== | ||
The following words (listed alphabetically) are required for translation: | The following words (listed alphabetically) are required for translation: | ||
- | ^ English ^ Black Speech | + | ^ English ^ Nûrlâm |
| dark | bûrz | TK " | | dark | bûrz | TK " | ||
| die | mat- | EL | | | die | mat- | EL | | ||
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| hall | shamb | NL < Noldorin "tham, thamb" (hall), Quenya " | | hall | shamb | NL < Noldorin "tham, thamb" (hall), Quenya " | ||
| in | or | LOS, [[case_locative# | | in | or | LOS, [[case_locative# | ||
- | | ::: | nâd | NL < SV " | ||
| king | durbal | NL < EL " | | king | durbal | NL < EL " | ||
| ::: | arn | NL < various elvish " | | ::: | arn | NL < various elvish " | ||
| land | uzg | EL | | | land | uzg | EL | | ||
| lie | kât- | LOS, from Quenya " | | lie | kât- | LOS, from Quenya " | ||
- | | lord | mâkh | NL, Valarin " | + | | lord | mâgz | NL, Valarin " |
| man, men | tark | TK, DBS, LOTR; Taken from language of orcs of Misty Mountains and other northern groups;\\ Quenya " | | man, men | tark | TK, DBS, LOTR; Taken from language of orcs of Misty Mountains and other northern groups;\\ Quenya " | ||
| mortal | matûrz | EL | | | mortal | matûrz | EL | | ||
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- | ===== The translation | + | ===== The Translation |
Krig nazg arnûr golug lata nût | Krig nazg arnûr golug lata nût | ||
- | Udug gazat mâkhûr nâd takob gundshamb | + | Udug gazat mâgzûr or takob gundshamb |
- | Krith tark-hai-ûr | + | Krith tark-haizûr |
- | Ash mâkhbûrzûr | + | Ash mâgzbûrzûr |
Uzgbûrzor amin bathum katû | Uzgbûrzor amin bathum katû | ||
Ash nazg durbatulûk, | Ash nazg durbatulûk, | ||
Ash nazg thrakatulûk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul | Ash nazg thrakatulûk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul | ||
- | Uzgbûrzor amin bathum | + | Uzgbûrzor amin bathum |
- | Original text is quite straightforward and do not contain complex grammar. [[grammar_case|Case endings]] differ from Elerrina' | + | Original text is quite straightforward and does not contain complex grammar. [[grammar_case|Case endings]] differ from Elerrina' |
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- One Ring at [[wp> | - One Ring at [[wp> | ||
- One Ring at [[tg> | - One Ring at [[tg> | ||
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- [[https:// | - [[https:// | ||
- [[http:// | - [[http:// | ||
- [[elerrina_list|Elerrina' | - [[elerrina_list|Elerrina' |